The birth of a quarantine nation - eDenmark
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In the previous editions of "Downfall of Denmark" you have been informed and warned about the greatest threat to the swedish empire: The danish disease. And though the creation of a quarantine nation under danish flag always has been the logic choice, this very solution has been subject to a huge conflict within the swedish government - dividing it into two camps.
To the great disappointment of the more nationalistic swedish politicians,
the men in power have now decided to act rather sooner than later, and the construction of the quarantine zone has begun.
But though this project to isolate all what is broken and corrupt within one sick nation is only a few hours old, it has already encountered its first major problem: European Humanists!
Led by the spannish, brittish and romanians, humanists from all over Europe has travelled to Copenhagen in order to protest against the construction of the quarantine nation.
It has already come to fights between the construction workers and the demonstrants as they tried to breach the newly-build wall.
The humanists argue that the danish natives - who are to live within the quarantine zone - are fellow human beings who just need a friendly pat on the back and a little guidance in order to function in the swedish society. And that the swedish men in power are inhumane.
Some of them even take it as far as blaming the cynical swedish industry of causing the "danish disease" in the first place.
But as these humanists are clearly misinformed, it is essential that swedish government starts a large media campaign, to stop the youth of europe from flocking to danish zone. The situation is already getting out of hand.
Once again our mighty swedish leaders need to act!
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Comments
Indeed they do..
If you really want to make your articles interesting you got to make a personal narrative. Otherwise we get these 'jouurnal entry' type articles. It would be great with some action. 🙂 Zombies or whatever.
Kære Grev Per
Lad os nappe den her på dansk.
Det er nu anden gang, at jeg oplever en kommentar, der forklarer mig hvordan jeg bør sammensætte mine artikler.
Nu husker jeg godt, at det var dig, som introducerede mig til de forskellige fora og henviste mig til nogle gode historiske artikler i forbindelse med min første artikel. Så jeg går ud fra, at din kommentar er skrevet med god hensigt. (I modsætning til den forrige hvor manden bag tydeligt prøvede at iscenesætte sig selv som overlegen og bedrevidende)
Kort og godt så skriver jeg først og fremmest fordi jeg finder det underholdende. Som du nok har luret, kommenterer jeg på den aktuelle situation på en alternativ måde. (Problemet med de mange britter, spaniere og romanere, der i øjeblikket kæmper for svenskerne i hovedstaden)
Jeg går derimod ikke så meget op i, hvor mange "votes" jeg får, da jeg hellere vil underholde og provokere de få, der finder min skrivestil interessant, end skrive til det brede publikum om druk, sex og tobak.
Konstruktiv kritik er selvfølgelig altid velkommen, da ingen er perfekt, men foretrækker at få det sendt til min post, så enhver tvivl om hvorvidt folk prøver at hjælpe eller promovere dem selv, kan blive manet til jorden.
- Men mon ikke også der kommer nogle andre typer artikler fra mine side? Måske den lille zombie-historie du har bestilt 🙂
I'm just saying.. your articles reminded me of news reports from 28 Days/Weeks Later (great films). And my comment wasn't such much a criticism as a suggestion. It just sounded like a criticism because I can only speak critically of other people. A birth defect. 🙁 it's true.. you can ask Skinke.
Nah but I like your articles. I should've said that. I just also like zombies and shotguns...I connect them to diseases.
Anyone ever write on a keyboard with a 'comma' key that didn't work? It's really awkward.
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