[FL] Autumn Disorder
Celadori Cotis
I found myself swept
again near the autumn coast
restive and weary
Fermenting leaves' sweet
odor painted so dreary
upon salted breeze
Pondering within
that cove above storm roil'd seas
I opened my eyes
Seeing the earth slip
from my feet into the skies
gave me no true pause
But on seeing all
their wistful patterns I lost
control and then wept
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..and again, with your words you have 'swept'..
Lovely 🙂
Just great.
Nice words you picked there
I seriously liked it 🙂
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