[CM Writing Contest] Bunker Down
Celadori Cotis
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Bunker Down
"The motto of the Netherlands is translated into English as 'I will uphold.' But I want you to know that, as we go forward, our message together is not just 'I will uphold,' but 'we will uphold.'"
- Loretta Lynch
My home
It was a beauteous sight
Nestled in the hills and
Tucked within a shaded valley
There I felt at home
Every where that I did trod
My beating heart was left behind
Speaking of that vision now
Fills my clouded eyes with tears
I wish that I had never seen
Nestled in the hills
That simple house
That became my home
And soon was smote
War had ravaged our Northern front
But I did fret about
Seeking nothing but to hold
Out for peace, surely... no doubt...
As I was drawing up
Many stuffy loan papers
The bombs to the West gave me no
pause
And on my first day,
While retaining the keys,
A never-ending fray
Was overtaking the East
I cared not a bit as the Southern
Front fell, completing their stranglehold
In my fortress so grand, I'm ashamed,
To say I became rather bold
No one can see me
I paraded without care
As the choppers swept up above
No one can hear me
I bellowed and yelled out
As flashlights swept out from the brush
No one can touch me
I shiver and look up-
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Comments
Oh a poem thingy, did not expect artsy stuff like this 😃
Lovely!
nice!
We have a winner here..
Excellent work!
Double post - double comm 🙂
..so strong..
..I've held my mobile close while reading, but at the end the photo stroke me.. and have been looking into it for some time, and rethinking what you wrote for us, CC..
It's quite amazing what you do with your words, how you create scenes and feelings in our minds and us.. each time..
Ps.
I'm looking forward to read other articles as well, and I'm sure I will get back to this one few more times 🙂
o7
R.
You have just won 5000cc + 1g for posting this one in eNL.