I didn't like the way the last book was going, so: Chapter one, Draft 2.

Day 1,877, 09:31 Published in United Kingdom United Kingdom by Novarefuge

Canus, in the Cornucopia system.
Well known by the locals, the colonies and even the keyworlds themselves as a planet more farm than dirt, Canus is 85% land with aquifers full of what remains of the water that used to cover the entire surface of the planet, home to over a million miles of prime arable, and what isn't the genetically modified crop, or the unforgiving sea, boiling with the heat released from the planets molten insides, is nature reserves, jungles full of earthen species, alien species, and even some species that are local, all in the twilight caused by the great Urrn'ak trees, local themselves to the world Idilicy, or in the crystal lined caves that seemed to glow with positive energy.
The most notable thing about planet Canus, in the year 2487, was not the abundance of crop plants, or the awe inspiring caves, or the wet, wild and dangerous jungle, or the 10 mile wide geothermal station on the equator.
No, the most notable thing about the planet at the time, was the fact that all of this was on fire.

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