eeh, I wrote some stuff
Lidskjalf
Well, this sucks, i just noticed that i have fallen from 334 subscribers to 57, since admin removed the ORG subs.
I guess i can kiss that MM trophy goodbye :/
But i have my selfe to blame here, i dont write that many articels so not much to do about that.
Well what to write about today then? Hmm, maby the old days... Or maby just mix it as i ususally do.
I remember my first days i erepublik, i wanted to join the Swedish army but i needed to get my strength up to about four or something, took a week or so, then i was granted access and placed in platoon Greed, i must say i was a bit dissapointed because the other platoons had cooler names, like Snake, Hellcats and so on. But soon i realized that we where the best so it didnt matter 🙂
ScymeX, platoon Greeds commander, quit the game and sold his account at that time.
It was exciting times, Canada and USA was invaded by the forces of Peace GC, and there we stood in EDEN, it looked grim i thought but the war turned and both the occupied countries where restored. And Peace GC later fell and became Phoenix.
The whole game looked different, local currency was acctually worth something then, and i thought that it gave that game more depth, you could acctually build your company empire and make good money.
But it feels like it is going downhill, and has done so since V1 became rising.
I meen, why the hell remove the work skill, it was something that you had to work for, now everyone produces the same, and sure its nice for new players but it wasent nice to me ore those guys that palyed longer than me.
It was more fun, now it is just about the fighting and spending gold for admins.
How hard can it be to see what is fun in a game, sure the fighting is the primary objekt, but atleast you had options before, now... well fuck if they dont do something good soon i dont know what i will do. Im tired of bending over and getting it up the ass everytime they "improve" the game
Hmm, that wasent what i thougth i would write about but ok it is what it is.
So what now, i hope that something exciting is going to happen soon in the world, the fighting is getting a little boring, well not boring but it is the same at least.
Well, i was going to write something more here but i have to do som work, im at the night shift on my job.
I might write something more interresting some other day.
Comments
I'll try to make this sound nice, because I'm really not trying to disrespect you I just want to help. This might be exactly the case, but it really feels like you spent like three minutes writing this (guess sounding nice just went out the window 😕). Honestly though, the content is interesting but the layout is pretty bad. Spend some time with the layout, maybe a few pictures. Makes the article look a lot nicer, and less people will close it at first sight
Seriously, what Isse said. Besides, your grammar is... Well, poor to say the least, I'm not being a dick, I'm just trying to help, I may look like a level 14 noob, but I have 2 years of erep experience up my ass 🙂
Another thing, separate your bigger chunks of text into smaller ones, and add a bit of pizzazz in your text, no one likes to read sentences like:
"It was exciting times, Canada and USA was invaded by the forces of Peace GC, and there we stood in EDEN"
Instead, try:
"Those were exciting times, Canada and their faithful ally the US, were invaded by the joint forces of PEACE GC, the battles were horrific, with mass amounts of casualties, and yet, there, we stood in EDEN..."
Well okay, maybe not that much pizzazz, but spice up your articles, and add some structure to them, don't change subjects left and right, focus on something, finish what you had to say about it, then swap to another subject 🙂
PS: You get sub 🙂
My previous comment was a load of bulls*it, please disregard it!
Thank you!
well, to be honest i wrote it fast i am at work. And i just wrote what came to mind.
So i didnt have any time to make it fancy, and i usually dont use any thing special in my articels, i can make stuff bold but thats about it 🙂
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cool story bro
Abit late, but i agree. Removing the work skill was a bad move. Esp since players had used gold too work it up faster. I mean, why would we put our back into it if it is removed? It is fucked up. And btw. Hail Ratatosk the squirrel! 😉