CP Entry for Rageldo Dimagiba, March 23rd 8 PM
OG Literary Award
CP Entry | Coffee - Another Useful Commodity
"If I were to be asked what would be another useful commodity in eRepublik,
I'd say coffee.
Why coffee? What does coffee do?
Coffee will boost your production rate and strength level temporarily.
It will cause you to become stronger in wars and get the most out of a day.
The production rates in companies will also increase to its maximum.
Coffee is a daily food supplement ranging from Q1 to Q5.
It’s made from coffee beans.
Here are the effects of coffee based on their Quality:
Q1 – .2 increase in strength and in all fields of Skills.
Q2 – .4 increase in strength and in all fields of Skills.
Q3 – .6 increase in strength and in all fields of Skills.
Q4 – .8 increase in strength and in all fields of Skills.
Q5 – 1 increase in strength and in all fields of Skills.
This increase will last temporarily on that day you used it."
Comments
It also causes your Ecitizens to develop Ediabetes, have high Ebloodpressure, and should also lower youe wellness by double if you drink it on any consecutive days.
Don't forget to add Ebreathmints to the order to get rid of the nasty smells all of the Ecitizens will have, as well as Etoothpaste to keep their Eteeth from looking like E$h!t.
It would definitely be nice to have a way to catch up to all those 14 strength people. This commodity would be in extremely high demand, and as such I'm sure it would be very expensive.
That'd be simple--all you need are eSteroids. However, if you consume too much of it, you would have an eOverdose and lose wellness rapidly until you get to a hospital. Of course, if you happen to be caught with these eSteroids, you'd be eSubpoenaed and have to defend yourself at an eTrial, that is if you don't have an eLawyer.
Hmm, that would be quite an interesting addition to this game.
Judge results -
Rageldo:
1) 3.5 - Choppy sentences / Random errors in grammar
2) 6.5 - Interesting idea / Did not explore coffee beans as resource
3) 6.5 - Lacked creative presentation
Final: 15.5/25
- A good idea to start with, but limited execution.
ouch..
Second judge:
CP Entry | Coffee - Another Useful Commodity
1)Grammar/Stylistics: 3/5
2) Persuasiveness/Veracity/Humourous Appeal: 5/10
3) Creativeness/Originality: 7/10
Total ___15_/25
Did you forget you needed to write this and so you just wrote a few sentences down? Anyways, it’s an interesting idea, very creative, but I don’t find it very useful. I for one would not waste my money on “coffee”. It was a good history lesson about coffee. I would of wished you would go into a bit more detail of how you would use the coffee in game.
Final Total = 30.5/50
Thanks guys! lol