[eIndia-Chain Stroy]Untitled Story - 2
Day 2,996, 09:20
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by Eraclev
This story is continuation from this chapter :
1. [Ash] Untitled Story - 1
This article is a chain story, The idea is simple and this story is meant to be a suspense story. We will have daily updates till the story is complete. looking to have a total of 10 days so... 20 paragraphs. On the day that no one else writes, me or Eraclev will put in 2 paragraphs.
The condition :
1.This story not Dioist kind of stories delving into black fantasy that is porn or lust themed.
2. This has to remain a tight suspense story along the lines of Agatha Christie, or Edgar Allan Poe or even Earl Stanley Gardener.
Continue.............
I request/nominate LordRajIndia to complete it on next 2 Paragraph if he not make in next 24 hours Ashwamaedh will publish it by himself for next 2 Paragraph!
Signed,
Ordinary Indian Citizen
Be active, reliable and independent Newbe.
eIndia require new seeds like you.
Enthusiastic, confident and conscious of the importance of community as well as intelligent and creative personal
1. [Ash] Untitled Story - 1
This article is a chain story, The idea is simple and this story is meant to be a suspense story. We will have daily updates till the story is complete. looking to have a total of 10 days so... 20 paragraphs. On the day that no one else writes, me or Eraclev will put in 2 paragraphs.
The condition :
1.This story not Dioist kind of stories delving into black fantasy that is porn or lust themed.
2. This has to remain a tight suspense story along the lines of Agatha Christie, or Edgar Allan Poe or even Earl Stanley Gardener.
MY FIRST TIME
The first time this happened was when I was a kid, where I found myself doing it. The night was a dark night, it rained endlessly, I feel the rain fell hard on my attic. My body feels light, and unconsciously either walking or dragged me down the stairs of my house, I heard the noise and looked to dining room i saw the face of daunting middle brandished a knife toward my mother. I bit down and that person had come through her side. My mother tried to stop him but he muscled. He had a knife, holding it like it was his own. He says, "You see this baby?". There bandana on his face so that I do not know who it was. I hardly ever see someone brandished a knife before that night. I do not know how he did it because of the current state of the dark and the rain was so heavy and i'm too scared to look. I just feel the breath out of my nose. The man was trying to thrust a knife in my mother's chest. Blood came out, and the last breath out of her. Suddenly i passed out.
After that, I gasped for air, I woke up in my bed and the police had come evidently my neighbor saw suspicious people go into my house. So he called the police as a precaution. No one saw the culprit's face, even until now could not be found. My father come late that night. That's the first time I had witnessed a crime. the murder, the murder of my own mother.
The first time this happened was when I was a kid, where I found myself doing it. The night was a dark night, it rained endlessly, I feel the rain fell hard on my attic. My body feels light, and unconsciously either walking or dragged me down the stairs of my house, I heard the noise and looked to dining room i saw the face of daunting middle brandished a knife toward my mother. I bit down and that person had come through her side. My mother tried to stop him but he muscled. He had a knife, holding it like it was his own. He says, "You see this baby?". There bandana on his face so that I do not know who it was. I hardly ever see someone brandished a knife before that night. I do not know how he did it because of the current state of the dark and the rain was so heavy and i'm too scared to look. I just feel the breath out of my nose. The man was trying to thrust a knife in my mother's chest. Blood came out, and the last breath out of her. Suddenly i passed out.
After that, I gasped for air, I woke up in my bed and the police had come evidently my neighbor saw suspicious people go into my house. So he called the police as a precaution. No one saw the culprit's face, even until now could not be found. My father come late that night. That's the first time I had witnessed a crime. the murder, the murder of my own mother.
Continue.............
I request/nominate LordRajIndia to complete it on next 2 Paragraph if he not make in next 24 hours Ashwamaedh will publish it by himself for next 2 Paragraph!
Signed,
Ordinary Indian Citizen
Be active, reliable and independent Newbe.
eIndia require new seeds like you.
Enthusiastic, confident and conscious of the importance of community as well as intelligent and creative personal
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YEAH !!
he he awesome!! 😃 we are getting deadly!!! I wonder what LordRaj will think up!!
Although anyone else who wants to write can please mention below , else I will put in the next 2 tomorrow o7
Thanks for keeping this going along a crazy direction!!
Dont know why, :3 I know you knew what I dragging to \o/
good idea
Good read
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Nice read
Intresting.
My suggestion, every new entry should publish the paragraphs before him, so the readers could comprehend the conexions and the twist of the story 🙂
Too much blood. We need boobs and zombies.
yeh