[BUN]The Silent Buzz
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by Ardikus V2
This article is about someone who puts in extra effort in almost everything he can for eCanada, and he's done it happily, because he wants to help this country become better.
This citizen, is C.Buzz.
And what makes him an unsung hero?
C.Buzz has served in The Crimson Order almost his whole eLife. he worked his way up from Private to Corporal, and then to Sergeant, then Lieutenant, and now he has been the Captain of the 2nd Legion for what has likely been over a year. He has done his duties effectively and responsibly, making sure his Legion is getting every supply it is entitled to.
He has joined into the political scene enthusiastically. He is one of the 21 'Founders' of The Crimson Order Party(TCOP) who donated 2 gold to its creation, and has run for congress every possible month since the Party was created.
What I find most odd, is that he has made himself so involved in these things, and has been loyal to eCanada since he first joined, and he still has only 98 friends? I say he should have his doings recognized, don't you all agree?
Three cheers for C.Buzz!
He has certainly earned them.
This article is for a contest, it can be found here: http://tinyurl.com/BuildUPNation
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C.Buzz ftw!
Yeps!
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gl
buzz is good people
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Comments from the judges.
T/A ~ The focus on quiet service to the nation behind the scenes was a good story to tell. It is hard to know what others do day-to-day to keep the place running so Buzz was a good face to put to the daily grind of nation building.
LS ~ the format was clean and easy to follow. The single image of his avatar was good and not overdone. A minor error and some more material in the paragraphs are what kept it from a slightly higher mark.
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Found wrong claim, in that Buzz has not run in every possible Congressional Election (only 1 out of a possible 3) and it looks like as a blocker, as he received 0 votes. However, article appears truthful in other aspects. He is in top 5 posters on Crimson forums (71 posts).
Buzz's article made good use of bold headings to separate thoughts, is concise and to the point. The use of italics and and underlining also helps to emphasis points the author wanted to bring to the reader's attention.
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