[BUN] The truth about Sasha
Code-Y
Many people don't know Sasha, many remain unaware. To Canada, she's just another PP of MDP. What most don't know, is that this beautiful wallflower is also a dedicated, patriotic, and eager Canadian.
She rules her party with an iron first, and has achieved many things that others haven't even contemplated, and why? Not because of luck, nor natural skill, but because of Hard Work.
Born in Canada, Sasha KammakitzJen joined the PTO'd Military Dictatorship Party in November 2011, with hopes of running for party presidency. However this was the month that Rylde revived the party. Although she lost, Sasha KammakitzJen stayed in the party learning politics mainly from Rylde.
After learning much about politics, she acheived her first congress seat in Prince Edward Island. Since then, she's worked hard in Congress, reading and reviewing, voting, listening, and learning! But not only this, she has not stopped here, she is on everyday in IRC, on the forums, still learning! Even she knows that knowledge has no limits and that's why she continues to better herself.
Recently, she's decided to run for CP, although everyone told her she'd fail, but regardless, she has decided to try.
Why? Why would she do such a thing!?
Because she's Determined, Relentless, and quite possibly a Fool❤
. But, she's trying, because she wants a better Canada, like we all do.
She's not special, she's not smart, she's an average Canadian, and that's what makes her special, that is what makes her an Outstanding Citizen.
This article is for a contest, it can be found here:http://tinyurl.com/BuildUPNation
Comments
First entry and, with the right pronoun, might just be a winner.
Sasha is passionate and works hard to build things, I'll give her(?) that. Voted and subbed.
UK
\o/
Thank-you, Code-Y.
voted and subbed
Judge Claude Frollo longed
To purge the world
Of vice and sin
And he saw corruption
Everywhere
Except within
eCanadian hero & legend
Indeed.
Nice work Code-Y
v+s
UltraCanadian. President or not, Sasha shows why Canada is respected by her allies and feared by her enemies.
Until now I have not heard of him ...it's other troll?.. lol
v & s.
v + s
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One of the most politically committed people I've seen.
o7
~POMF~
Comments from the Judges
Most claims could are not verifiable, or fails to provide examples of claim. For example, "has achieved many things that others haven't even contemplated." Also, unlikely she is on IRC *every* day. Saying she is on IRC most days would be much more likely.
On style, the last sentence of article which makes the claim that she is ordinary in many respects, and this is what makes her outstanding seems rather contradictory. The quote that she is "quite possibly a fool" probably should not be used when trying to exalt someone.
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T/A ~ A good overview of Sasha's political career and indication of her drive. I see plenty of career and knowledge building described, yet would like more info on nation building, as per the contest focus.
LS ~ A straightforward style. Image may need resizing. The formatting of text with underline and bold was good for emphasis.