[Kami Poetry Competition] Skydiving
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Okay, let's make this short and sweet. This is a poem I wrote a few months ago. It's about skydiving and personally I think it is one of the best poems I've ever written. With all the serious poems so far, I wanted to lighten it up a bit. The poem type is an onomatopoeia poem - that means you use words that sound like sounds in your poem a lot. Now, without further ado, here we go!
"SKYDIVE"
Chirp! go the birds outside,
Slam!, there's the door.
Stuck in a plane, up in the sky,
Boing! - out the hatch.
Whoosh! the wind around me says,
racing with each other.
Vroom! the sound of planes above,
Honk! cars below!
Click! the parachute, trying to open,
Crack! - the thing just broke.
Splat!, on the ground below
Well, I guess I'm dead.
Some skydiving pictures!
Well, that's it. Thanks for reading, hope you enjoyed and don't pick your nose!
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Comments
Didn't you skip over the most important part?
Crack! the chute is broke.
Scream!...
Weep!...
Laugh!...
Roar!...
Splat!...
& Tom Petty, 2
http://youtu.be/gd47efJUE60 (axlol)
Must have been right around the time Axl started getting annoying
unserious & fun
loved it
So amusing XD
~hyuu~