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Day 1,787, 02:27 • Published in Australia

• by Chris Carnage

I was talking to some people on IRC who provided some constructive criticism of my writing style. I summarise their suggestions to:

* Use more pics
* Write fewer words
* 3 paragraphs max

None of this sits well with me, but those offering the advice are people who deserve respect so I comply (damn, 3 paragraphs gone already).

Comments

Chris Carnage Day 1,787, 02:27

It just doesn't work for me...

Binda33 Day 1,787, 02:30

Needs more pics of cats : P

Callumh123 Day 1,787, 02:31

Back to wall of texts with you!

Henry the 8th Day 1,787, 02:35

....

3 paragraphs then a pic, not 3 paragraphs total 😛😛

Chris Carnage Day 1,787, 02:36

I am not a good listener🙁

wingfield Day 1,787, 03:17

Need more text! - pictures are for other purposes! 🙂

Mr Crumpets Day 1,787, 03:45

No Boobs = No Votes

Miss Wolf Day 1,787, 03:57

Awww, I wub your walls of text! ^__^

infin Day 1,787, 05:03

TLDR

Alla Xul cr1so Day 1,787, 07:45

need more bullsh1ts then i reckon it's perfect. hehehehe

Arfman Day 1,787, 13:21

Not enough impossible promises!

Lord TJ Day 1,787, 13:58

Here's the best tip:

Never reduce yourself. Those who want you to lessen the impact of your creativity pay the least attention to the game. If for any reason folks can't understand, make them understand. If they don't know a word, it's the internet - they can look it up.

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