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number two sounds better imo

you poem (v) lacks of the words I mention and other words too 🙂 🙂

Well, it's not actually a poem, but in Gibran's "The Prophet" it's all covered 🙂

"Love has no other desire but to fulfil itself.
But if you love and must needs have desires, let these be your desires:
To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night.
To know the pain of too much tenderness.
To be wounded by your own understanding of love;
And to bleed willingly and joyfully.
To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving;
To rest at the noon hour and meditate love's ecstasy; to return home at eventide with gratitude;
And then to sleep with a prayer for the beloved in your heart and a song of praise upon your lips."

no mention of which dedication you liked

i dont know any poems :/
and i cant even create one my self

but vote for the move

for someone like you I expect far more that this. im sure you can make it 🙂 🙂

Heavenly cursed and heavily sinned I
No more i like to add them, so, I want to die
And I want to become a holy ghost
Whom the people would like the most.
Like the retreating soldiers I like to come back
To my own permanent and eternal home
You may call it a suicide or martyrdom.

In my real home I see the news
Coming from the lipstick coated lips
In the television of my molten death
People are sobbing with a heavy breath.
The atmosphere is heavy and they feel the pain
This thrills me and gives a feeling of gain.


The only son of my father
The only darling of my mother
Fainted repeatedly on the cushion
Peal like tear drops coming from my beloved son,
Friends and relatives express grief in the community hall,
All these excite me and I sought to say'' I love you all.''

For the first time in my life in my last ritual I listen
From those men that I was really a very very good man.
In such intense atmosphere of gloom and sad
My heart cheers and I become too much glad.

you didn't say what dedication you liked better

the first one

σε μορφη χαικου.

αγαπη μου,
εισαι η ευτυχια,
και ο πονος μου.

an afto einai to poima sou tote den metra giati den ekanes chrisi olon ton lekseon pou ethesa os oro kai den echi pei pia afierosi sou arese aptis dio

ευτυχία πόνος
του Μητσοτάκη ο κλώνος
αγάπη εσύ
κουράδα χαμογελαστή


Μ αρέσει το πρώτο

Με διαφορά το καλύτερο.

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-Moυ αρέσει το 2ο cover

!(Στίχοι δικού μου τραγουδιού, με copyright καταχωρημένο)!
"Ότι περάσαμε μαζί σκέφτομαι πάλι μόνος,
ο ιδρώτας μου με έλουσε, με μέθυσε ο πόνος.
Βλέπεις δεν ήσουν ικανή ν’αντέξεις μια αγάπη δυνατή
κι εγώ ο χαζός το πίστεψα πως θα ‘μαστε μαζί.
Φάνηκες αχάριστη, δεν πείστηκες για μένα.
Με πρόδωσες, με άφησες, μου φαίνεται σαν ψέμα.
Εγώ σε λάτρεψα, μα εσύ δεν έμεινες κοντά μου,
την ευτυχία μας γκρέμισες κι έφυγες μακριά μου."

Ποιος έχτισε τη Θήβα την εφτάπυλη;
Στα βιβλία δε βρίσκεις παρά των βασιλιάδων τά ονόματα.
Οι βασιλιάδες κουβάλησαν τ’ αγκωνάρια;Καί τη χιλιοκατεστραμμένη Βαβυλώνα —
ποιος την ξανάχτισε τόσες φορές;
Σε τί χαμόσπιτα
της Λίμας της χρυσόλαμπρης ζούσαν οι οικοδόμοι;Τη νύχτα που το Σινικό Τείχος αποτελείωσαν,
πού πήγανε οι χτίστες;Η μεγάλη Ρώμη
είναι γεμάτη αψίδες θριάμβου. Ποιος τις έστησε;
Πάνω σε ποιους
θριαμβεύσανε οι Καίσαρες;Το Βυζάντιο το χιλιοτραγουδισμένο
μόνο παλάτια είχε για τους κατοίκους του;

Ακόμα και στη μυθική Ατλαντίδα,
τη νύχτα που τη ρούφηξε η θάλασσα,
τ’ αφεντικά βουλιάζοντας,
μ’ ουρλιαχτά τους σκλάβους τους καλούσαν.

Ο νεαρός Αλέξανδρος υπόταξε τις Ινδίες.
Μοναχός του;

Ο Καίσαρας νίκησε τους Γαλάτες.
Δεν είχε ούτ’ ένα μάγειρα μαζί του;

Ο Φίλιππος της Ισπανίας έκλαψε όταν η Αρμάδα του
βυθίστηκε. Δεν έκλαψε, τάχα, άλλος κανένας;

Ο Μέγας Φρειδερίκος κέρδισε τον Εφτάχρονο τον Πόλεμο.
Ποιος άλλος τόνε κέρδισε;

Κάθε σελίδα και μια νίκη.
Ποιος μαγείρεψε τα νικητήρια συμπόσια;

Κάθε δέκα χρόνια κι ένας μεγάλος άντρας.
Ποιος πλήρωσε τα έξοδα;

Πόσες και πόσες ιστορίες.
Πόσες καί πόσες απορίες.

Ερωτήσεις ενός εργάτη που διαβάζει-Μπέρλοτ Μπρεχτ
το 2ο.

den echis chrisimopoihsei tis lekseis pou echo anaferei os oro

δεν ηθελα να αλλοιωσω το ποιημα!δεν πειραζει αρκει να σου αρεσε και να περασε το μηνυμα που επρεπε..

Τι ευτυχία μα και τι πόνος
είναι αυτό που νιώθω μόνος
Θέλω πολύ να είσαι εσύ
η αγάπη μου η καλοκαιρινή
Να κάνουμε έρωτα όλο τρέλα
Ξέχνα τον πόνο και τα γέλια
απόψε θα έχουμε και κρέμα.

Το 2ο πιο καλό

I want to be the very best
Like no one ever was
To catch them is my real test,
To train them is my cause.

I will travel across the land,
Searching far and wide.
Each pokémon, to understand
The power that's inside.

Pokémon (gotta catch 'em all)
It's you and me
I know it's my destiny
Pokémon
Ooh you're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokémon (gotta catch 'em all)
A heart so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me and i'll teach you
Pokémon
Gotta catch 'em all
Gotta catch 'em all

Every challenge along the way
With courage i will face
I will battle everyday
To claim my rightful place

Come with me the time is right
There's no better team
Srm and arm we'll win the fight
It's always been our dream

Pokémon (gotta catch 'em all)
It's you and me
I know it's my destiny
Pokémon-Pokémon
You're my best friend
In a world we must defend
Pokémon (gotta catch 'em all)
A heart so true
Our courage will pull us through
You teach me and i'll teach you
Pokémon-Pokémon
Gotta catch 'em all
Gotta catch 'em all,

your poem is not according to the (rule) that I said as it does not have the words (love, joy and pain in it) . also you have not mentioned what song dedication you liked from the options I gave

what should i do?
seek out a powerful patron to pursue ?
cling to him like a vine ?
wind around him to fawn and whine ?
and rise through ruse instead of merit ?
no thank you !
compose,as a rule poems for usurers?
play the fool hoping to see some minister
give a smile that's not sinister ?
no thank you !
breakfast off a toad ?
grovel on the dirty road ?
wear the knees of my breeches through ?
and kiss feet too ?
no thank you !
find genius in imbeciles ?
and let out shrtill squeals of regret
when my name is missing from some gazette ?
no thank you !
be scared of being thought paltry ?
prefer social visits to poetry ?
write placets and be introduced ?
no thank you ! no thank you !
but sing, dream...laugh...move on..be alone...have a choice...
have a watchful eye and a powerful voice wear my hat awry...
fight for a poem if i like and perhaps even die.
never care about fame or fortune and even travel to the moon!
triumph by chance on my own merit
refuse to be the clinging ivy nor even the oak or the lime.
perhaps i'll not get far.
but i'll get there alone.

this is not poem btw xdxd

the second try was better but you only used the words love and you. there is no mention of the words pain and joy. also you did not say which song you liked best .

I am afraid that your poem also is NOT eligible for this contest because it does not have the words (joy, pain , love) . also ,same applys for you that you have not mentioned what song dedication from the options I gave do you like best. for one that writes so much I expected more. this means you should have read much too and written too

I love you You love me
We're a happy family
With a great big hug and a kiss from me to you.
Won't you say you love me too
I love you You love me
We're best friends like friends should be
With a great big hug and a kiss from me to you.
Won't you say you love me too
I love you You love me
We're a happy family
With a great big hug and a kiss from me to you.
Won't you say you love me too
I love you You love me
We're best friends like friends should be
With a great big hug and a kiss from me to you.
Won't you say you love me too