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Architect of dreams

Day 4,200, 10:31 • Published in India India

• by Visor Of Blades

Walking on the roots of the dream
The roots like the railroad lasted in happiness
In the mind of a child, it is more beautiful than a diamond
Nothing in the world is more pure than the mind of the child

With small feet, step through the memories
With lovely hands, touching endless space
With a beautiful smile, like to wake up my heart
With pure eyes, like the blue ocean

In the children's imagination, everything is bright
I can see white birds fly around
I do not understand why my head is not there
Maybe I live so long in my lonely space

I need to change
My dream of a world of peace
Now the magic sound comes to my mind
I can imagine a day, I can do my wish

One day, I will become "Architect of dreams"
A dream never gets lost in the dark
Hope will last forever with time
A wish will become the root of the other wishes

My father told me
"How many stars can you count in the sky?
Of course you can not because ...
You can not count your dreams!"

Comments

Ashwamaedh Day 4,200, 11:09

endorsed for the weed ... get some more from the cc 😃

Interesting but yes, lacking a real lyrical thread 🙂 Good attempt ... great for a Jimi Hendrix or Jim Morrison song 🙂 though some phrases such as "architect of dreams" , "of course" and a few more ... basically words that break the flow and interrupt the flow of the song/rhythm 🙂

With a few alterations, this can be pretty awesome... keep up the dreaming! 🙂

Visor Of Blades Day 4,201, 10:28

Thanks for your suggestions

Vijayakrishna Day 4,201, 09:15

Ah re-read once you are done writing something 5 mins later, it should help with some incoherence in the lines. We can compete in writing better if you wanna? 😉

Visor Of Blades Day 4,201, 10:29

Yup I usually re-read, but I was smoked up, and hence the condition. Sure, we can compete if you want

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