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Facebook ad - Draft 1

Day 1,851, 14:41 • Published in Australia

• by witherd1

Recently I posted an article asking for donations to help pay for advertising on facebook (http://www.erepublik.com/en/article/asking-for-donations-to-advertise-for-new-players-2173816/1/20). If you can contribute, please do, as the more money we can raise, the longer we can run the ad for, and the better the chances are of seeing results.

Now for the first draft copy of the ad, I was thinking something along these lines, and keep in mind, facebook ads are very small, short and to the point.

Help liberate your country! Chile has taken over Australia, now is the time to join and help free our Nation.

Thoughts, ideas, criticism, etc, please.

Comments

Vyrin the First Day 1,851, 15:18

someone is actually trying to use the mechanics of the game in our favor
i hope he's the next cp

DraimAlexander Day 1,851, 15:28

I like it, something simple like that is probably best.

Oh, you should have a donation in your email 🙂

witherd1 Day 1,851, 15:54

Sorry, Paypal account for donations is witherd1@gmail.com

WageSlave Day 1,851, 15:55

looks good man.

Kami Carmine Day 1,851, 16:00

Looks good - and Vyrin - he's dCP atm 😃

mzCielly Day 1,851, 17:32

Good job, witherd1!

Xavier Griffith Day 1,851, 18:35

Not bad witherd, but what happens if it goes to full adversting AFTER a peace with eChile? Wouldn't something more generic work better?
IE: Our nation is small but attacked by enemies on all sides, now is the time to join and help defend our nation!
Or something like that? At least it covers you if we have a peace deal while this is live.

witherd1 Day 1,851, 19:28

Yeh XG, I figured it can be changed as our circumstances change.

Alla Xul cr1so Day 1,851, 20:14

farken awesome mate. good onyah!

Icetek Day 1,851, 21:08

Witherd1 i wish you would listen to me when i tell you its a waste of money. Your add will never make it on facebook bro. So many people have tried this, not only to help there "eCountry" but also to get rich themselves by using the refferal program in there favor.

I dont mean to burst your bubble bro, but facebook is a lost cause. Try looking up LOCAL AD agency's for websites, even google ads?

witherd1 Day 1,851, 21:41

I'll take a look Icetek, but I'm still going to try Facebook.

Lord TJ Day 1,851, 23:36

witherd1 considering 'you know what' you might want to take the Chile reference out.

witherd1 Day 1,852, 01:59

I thought it was all quite neutral and harmless actually TJ, it's not stating anything about political standing, merely that Chile has taken us over, which they have, and that we need to free our country, which we do, no matter how we end up managing to do that.

witherd1 Day 1,852, 18:24

I had to shorten the blurb, as I was 20 characters over what was allowed.

The new blurb is:
Help liberate your country! Chile occupies Australia, now's the time to help free us.

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