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by lucky3217
I saw that erepublik poeples whrit a lot in English so i want to improve mine 😛
i will speak about my self evry day a llittle think but i want a lot of correction for me please help me to grow up this English thank you and Happy christmas !
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Merry xmas. If You need any help You can Always contact Me 😆
Hello Merry christmas good luck
If you want help to write
http://www.erepublik.com/en/article/tout-savoir-pour-eacute-crire-un-article-version-francaise-2252495/1/20
ne t'inquiète pas pour l'anglais, si tu préfères écrire en français on traduira avec les sites appropriés. Ainsi tu es plus à l'aise ^.*
Erepublik is a great place to improve your english.
Here a few corrections(probably typo's, but correcting it anyway):
* poeples whrit ---> people write
* my self evry day a llittle ---> myself every day a little
Good luck! I improved my english on erepublik to.
I English speak good eRepublik thanks ! (lel)
Seriously, I really improved my English thanks to eRepublik, I can speak English without any problem now 😃
eRep is a great way to improve your fluency in English communication but don't assume all vocabulary and grammar is used correct 🙂
Bravo, t'as déjà fait un premier bon pas, les autres suivront 😉
Good luck with your newspaper ! 😉
Good luck, eRep is a great place to improve it! i'll make a confession to you.. I'm also improving it here!
Keep up the good work, do not hesitate to use Google translate. It's also a way to learn english : write in french, translate with google, read the result. It will learn vocabulary, then you'll learn the grammar and syntaxes by practicing and reading other articles.
For the correction :
"people write"
"about myself everyday" (Every days, Tom works. Tom works everyday.)
J'aurais écrit "need" plutôt que "want" à propos des corrections. Si tu voulais dire "je voudrais", c'est I would like.
"grow up" = grandir. Tu aurais pu utiliser : improve, boost, develop, enhance, progress (in), ... En anglais, il y a ENORMEMENT de nuances dans les verbes, lorsque tu parviendras à jongler avec, ton niveau d'anglais va faire un véritable bond en avant (ici, le verbe "boost" résume le bond en avant, ce qui n'est pas le cas des autres)
N'hésite pas, quand tu veux apprendre d'autres verbes, à chercher des synonymes. En tout cas, très chouette initiative. 🙂