The Adventures of Sir Jimmy Savile
Sir Jimmy Savile
Hello my dear reads, so this chapter toke so long. I've been busy with work and other things. I am looking for someone to read my work before I publish cause when I re read my work I notice many mistakes and I hate it. So here are the results from the last chapter.
A - 5
B - 1
C - 1
D - 4
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Chapter 4 - The Circus
Seeing 3 bandits attacking a harmless jester made you angry. You decide that you are going to help this poor man. You walk ahead of the group while readying you're bow. Before Curtis can stop you, you fire an arrow at the bandit and miss. Mick has a smile on his face and starts drawing his sword. You fire shot after shot of the bandits as they close in, mick starts laughing and Curtis is in a panic. The jester makes a remark about you're aim and in anger you draw 3 arrow a prepare to fire them all at the same time. You fire the arrows, one of the bandits is hit on the throat, killing him. Another is hit in the leg making him fall to the floor. And the last bandit is hit on the shoulder, stopping his charge. Mick Charges at the other two while they are still on the floor. Cutting of the head of the one standing and slitting the throat of the one on the floor.
Mick returned blood socked and congratulated you, while the jester was in awe. Mick grabs the jester by the beard and pulls him close.
"why were these bandits after you?" Mick say with anger.
"I don't know, that's what bandits do. They attacked my on my way back to the circus." The man says quickly and worried
You see Kirfect sitting by a tree shaking and decide to go and see if she's okay.
"That was too close, if think you got a bit lucky there kid" she said shaking and with a fake smile.
Mick comes over with his arm resting on the shoulder of the jester, the jester was shacking and had worry painted all over his face.
"The jester here has offered us a place to stay for the night. Who wants to go see a circus?" Mick looks too excited.
Curtis has now calmed down and raises his hand "Me me me." He also looks too excited.
Kirfect stands up and hugs mick, whispering something into his ear. You ignore what might have been said and begin you're journey to the circus.
When you arrive at the circus, the jester takes you to his leader. The leader is a very thin Norseman who looks a though he as never shaved a single hair from his body, and is wearing what is meant to be sexy women's clothing.
The jester introduces you to his leader"This is Gail, head of out traveling circus"
You all take it in turns to introduce each other and shake his grease hands. clearly he has never washed. The jester explains what has happened to Gail. Gail thanks you and gives you 10 gold pieces, he also offers you a place to stay the night as well then leaves so he can practice his next act. The jester says that Gail is also a unic. Mick, Kirfect and Curtis all start laughing. But you don't know why.
The jester takes you all to the part of the circus that serves alcohol. The 4 adults start talking. You learn that the circus is also traveling to London to preform for the king. Mick explained why you're group is going there to. Curtis jumps out his seat and says he's finished micks song. Mick does a face-palm.
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About the time Mick was a guard,
Not a monster, he was a saint rather,
Who happened to have once killed his father,
I'm not quite sure why he was promoted,
But it's what the king's committee voted,
I guess he did save this town and make it perfect,
And he good in bed with his girlfriend Krifect,
Anyway, to our new royal guard we give three cheers,
But in your new role you'll have to cut back on the beers.
After everyone done laughing at Curtis, you decide it's time to leave before everyone gets drunk. Where do you go?
A - Practice with your bow (You need it)
B - To you're room to get some sleep
C - Wonder around the camp
Comments
A
When i was young I used to red books like this by Steven Jackson and Ian liverstone
C.
I've always wondered what woundering was so I went to urban dictionary:
wondering with the express purpose of inflicting emotional wounds
I've always woundered what it was...
I corrected it, maybe we will hurt Gail's feelings 😉
This is an outrage ! You changed the rules. 😛
My vote goes to C because something might happen...
Not sure why everyone laughed at me, this one was quite good!
One time I was on a voyage across the North Sea: I had just come back from the Summer raiding.
Our navigator was pretty bad, and somehow we ended up very close to the Arctic circle, and with no land in sight we were running lo on food.
Eventually we had no food at all, we had already eaten all the badgers on the ship, and had absolutely nothing to eat. So, in the depths of a freezing night I cut me precious parts off and ate em.
Those were tough times.
Oh, I vote c btw.
Oh damn I thought you meant that I was the circus owner.
I'm the jester right? Not the testicles-less circus owner?
no, you're the unic. I changed my mind
C
C
Thanks for the help
I'll go for C.
I'll proof read your stuff before you publish it, if you want too.
Thanks WookieO 😃
A - how else are you going to protect me?
Voting Closed